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Re: Uhhh... Hi!
Hey, welcome- I also liked your name, but not the one you use....Quinn is really cool! I come from a big family as well, I'm the youngest of ten children, ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: I'm Eimear!
Hey, I've been a member for a couple of weeks here, so I thought I'd introduce myself and give a bit of background, but i'll keep it short cuz I ...
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Re: Trigger Switch
No problem, I enjoyed reviewing your work because its clear you've got real talent. The errors etc are very small in comparison, so well done. Could you possibly PM me ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Trigger Switch
This is a good enough poem, but I agree, it sends the emo alarm bells in my ears ringing, the first two lines in particular As i touched his frozen ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: The Dance of the Dead
Hmmm, yes, yes I enjoyed this. The title was what really drew me in (FYI-The Dance of the Dead- great). The general idea and the way your thoughts meandered and ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: The man in front
He is the man in front Who bears the brunt, Of what is out there, A war of two men in disrepair. Of the drone of guns, The battle of ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: YWS to the RESCUE!
Heyhey, a funny and orginal poem, a complete gem! It's actually quite a feat to write a good poem about the act of writing, so well done you. I especially ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Opening Night
This is totally unlike anything I've read before. I guess that's why I like it so much. The repitition is good, as well as the expressionistic methods we'd usually relate ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: I think
Hey, nice idea for a poem. I liked certain aspects of this, but there's no getting away from the repitition, which, gets a little tiring to read to say the ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Thoughts of a Beautiful Field
Heyhey, I really enjoyed reading this, expecially the way it was blank verse so you really went to town with your poetic voice, not having to worry too much about ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Silence
I agree, I enjoyed the rhythm of this piece, especially the last line, but to me I just wasn't gripped enough to be left wanting more. Perhaps develop a couple ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: A Bad Person, Chapter Two
It was summer in America the morning when we left. The type of day when even though you live in the city, breathing in gas and pollution, you could still ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: No Name # 1
Hey, I quite enjoyed the descriptive language in this, especially this line at the begining: It was the same wind that awoke the listless strands of hair and swirled them ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: How many words is the average novel?
I'd say about 40,000 to 100,000 for young novel. Saying that, when I wrote 50,000 words for nanowrimo, it fitted my story just right. I guess every novels different. J.K ...
Feb 14, 2008 -
Re: Character Discriptions
Definately option B for me, as I find I'm usually only descovering my character's real personality as the piece develops and the plot takes off. Even though I do try ...
Feb 14, 2008
