Eimear

Welcome boys got cooties! (They certainly do....what exactly are cooties? *Sratches Irish head with much confusion... Anyways, I'm Eimear! Glad to see you've came back, I'm somewhat of a newbie ...

Hey there Kaye- and welcome to the YWS! Wow- you've been writing for a really long time- 7 years! *Sharp intake of breath* Thats really cool, I've only been writing ...

On a related note (which is strange for me as I usually sprout useless nonsense,) J.K Rowling was ordered by Bloomsberry to change from Joanne to J.K., for fear that ...

Hey, I don't have much time to review this so I'll be quick....writing and homework beckons! Nice job mate. Seriously. I reads very nicely indeed, its clear that your not ...

Hey- and welcome to YWS, I hope you stick around, because I love to review a nice bit of poetry every now and then. Ok, at a glance- I liked ...

Heyhey Autumn- and welcome to YWS! I love your name, much more orginal than mine- it's just my real one! Strange? Don't ask.... Well if you love writing you've came ...

*Nods head approvingly* Two words for this one. Spot. On. But It would be cruel to only give you those, so I'm gonna tell you what I like about this ...

I heard of a writer you actually sought out rejection letters. He planned to cover his bathroom walls in them. Unfortunately, someone accepted his work...tough break lol! I havent had ...

Hey, i'd also like a crit on my poem in the Dramatic Poetry section -'A hand takes yours' Only if you can though, Thanks in advance, Eimearxx

Whoops, thanks Kyte.

You've fought in every battle, And broken every bone. Nothing left in what your saying, In crowds, but all alone. Time leaves no gaps for crying, The dead have troubles ...

A true gem of a poem. Most of what a felt about it has already been voiced (all good stuff), but the bit that really sold it for me is ...

I liked this ok, although it didnt really move me. The reptition of 'eyes' is good to begin with, but it gets a little jarring after a while: I see ...

Space out the lines, and then I promise you i'll give a detailed critque. Its almost midnight and I'm supposed to be writing my novel....jeese i've got school tommorrow as ...

I'll second that- Nothing is 'allowed' to be an info dump in your story. That term is used as a negative criticism. Cut the prologue, and give us the first ...