Eimear

Unexpected and poignant. I said it once my good friend, and I'll say it again. Poetry at it's best.

Iwarned you Burma. I told you this would happen. "If the buck stops here" Then why do your people cry? Listen, they are coming. And now you in your room, ...

The plans, the talk behind hands, The packing, the arrangements, The goodbyes, the tears, We're going to the land of milk and honey, Everything will be fine. We will have ...

Cool....the title drew me in for sure. 'For the win' is heartfelt and kind of gutsy if you catch my drift, I knew right before I read it that it ...

Put it this way, we've won it the most times. Making fun of it? I think we've earned it!

Cool- more like a story than a poem, but all the better for it. Havent got many issues with this, just a good job. Eimearxx

Hmm, i liked this....very nice indeed. You wrote it with gritty intention, and that's what I as a reader got. Your title is 'The Emotion of Anger' and I felt ...

Oh dear...you're a grammar nut? *Runs away, the sound of abandoned writing flapping the wind.... Just kidding, nice to meet you!

I dunno about using my name...it's pretty long, and very Irish...probably just my first intial and second name.

Ah, I did this in school the other day. Have fun guys!

Ooo, this one sent shivers down my spine- a great bit of poetry! *Rubs hands* This piece is absoultely dripping with great metaphores. Seriously dude. They're spot on. The first ...

What am I doing on this thread reading it? I should be writing! Darn!

Yeah- I've never heard of it!

Emotions on a page? Sorry, I couldnt really get into this. I would suggest not having such a detailed first paragraph, then my mind won't wander. Hope that helps Eimear

Hey, I liked reading this. We're doing about the Cold War in History, so it was really cool to see it put by a good writer into a dramatic story. ...