Eimear

When the sheets of clear blue water break relentlessly over and under me so that I am immersed; out of my depth. With my heart pounding in me like when ...

I agree, 'pissed' is pretty funny. But also very real, and raw- like what true love in the real world is like. There's not hearts and roses, there's frustration, long ...

Hullo John and welcome to YWS! I'm glad to hear you're very excited to join us. We're excited to have another budding writer in our midst. When I joined I ...

Hey, and welcome to YWS! It's a great place for us writers to come and post work, critque or just relax. I hope you settle in well. So it thought ...

I often see writing a book in terms of suffering from a fever; you have to sweat it out. When I get disheartened or feel like I'm banging my head ...

Okies, I'm going to be honest because that's what I would expect from another writer and that's what you deserve. You have talent. And, it seems a kind of creative ...

Haha. I admire your nerve in not doing stuff until the last minute. It reminds me fondly of myself. A real trait in a true writer. All that said...sometimes poetry ...

The overall concept of writing or leaving a letter to an ex through poetry sounds pretty cool. I'm sure they'd be sorry when they see how good you are. Hehe. ...

I'm going to skim over the structural content and issue with commas in this work. In any case, the others before me have pointed it out and I'm taking into ...

I want to go out on my neck and review the poem in terms of how I understood and related to it. I think it's comparing the fact that ones ...

Exam Blues The sun outside is blazing yellow, but my inside walls are grey. Footsteps and temples pounding, clocks ticking time away. This isn’t how I imagined life, scrambling for ...

I think it's time for another update. Wow, where is all it coming from? Since my birthday and the start of spring/summer I've had a creative burst that seems to ...

Is there a way argue with time, And negotiate your mistake, Of forcing it on its way? Like to hold a growing child in your arms, Wishing to never let ...

I think it would be better to name this poem 'Irony' because that's the overriding theme I got from it. I wrote a review for this before but my connection ...

You wrote a whole poem without realizing it? I wish I was the same, it's so darn hard for me to get the words down and look half decent. Firstly, ...