Eimear

Is there room for me on the spacing bandwagon? I love the structure! It's amazing, and made me want to read on, and on, and on. Perfect for poetry in ...

Hey. This is a subtly brilliant piece. I really did love what I read. If I'm right in saying it's about light slowly gathering and draining during the day, every ...

Grr! What it is? Hehe, I too quite liked this, once you get over the punctuation problems ect. It's a first draft, I know- but a good, and esstential habit ...

Thanks for the great reviews, guys!

Heya Jasmine, Ireland calling! Oh wait, that's a Eurovision song contest saying, maybe that's a little confusing...anyways, hello! And welcome to YWS! You play hockey? I've only ever seen it ...

The idea of this poem was good, but you really do need to polish up your work before posting it, as it took away from it and made me not ...

I often think, that through negative suggestion that people try so hard not to make their work cliched or well-worn that the end result is just that. In this poem, ...

Hmmm...yes indeed, I liked it. Hold on, lets just go all out here- count me as one of the reviewers who adored it. You might find it helpful to print ...

Hey Jesse. Enjoying YWS? So this poem didn't really wow me. In my head, I knew the concept and word choice was alright, but I failed in my heart to ...

I don't know if you've heard this before, but your writing is strangely addictive. It demanded to be read. That is a VERY good thing. So I loved this. The ...

I tend to believe that writing deadlines are a very good concept for the disciplined writer's progress and eventual success. I'm just afraid to say that just isn't me . ...

Hey, I think everyone's pretty covered the basics so I'll just drop in to say Weclome to YWS! God believe or not I never get sick of saying that. It ...

Tut, tut, tut. Writing poems when you should be paying attention in class. I suppose people in glass houses shouldn't throw stones though, I'm suppose to be studying! So good ...

I agree with changing the title. Show, don't tell. I'll try and think if an alternative if you'd like. Otherwise, I enjoyed this. It spoke to me. Maybe this is ...

Kudos for the unique name. And welcome to YWS! I do hope you don't find me freaky or wierd hehe. Anyways, as the others have suggested, feel free to PM ...