Eimear

I would have to agree with Brad, I didn't really gain a deeper insight into the subject of dreaming or nightmares by reading this. The imagery is very juvenille, and ...

I just got this one tonight...and I'm pleased to say that I'm sticking with it. For anyone who doesn't know, it's of Paolo Nutini, Scottish Soul singer.

I'm going to send a mass PM...I bet they'd love to reply to me... Sniff.

Thanks for the great review :D

It's gone on mine...bugs are awful things. There was a huge one in my bathroom this morning.

I don't like the way it clicks in and out of place like a dislocated bone when you scroll up and down. It's ... freaky. Haha. That's one good metaphore ...

Awk shucks. I'm the second person to comment. Hehe. But back to the poem. It's alright, not life changes or completely orginal but there's some good ideas intertwined. Another thing, ...

Ooo. I liked. It seems kind of mundane and normal at first, but when you roll your eyes over the structure and rythmn it's kind of pleasantly quirky. I liked ...

Scroll down to the end of the topic and click "post reply". I'm not sure how I could word this any other way. Guys? A little help? Eimear

Heyhey from sunny Ireland! Is the weather bad in England? That's bad to hear...then again I'm doing AS Levels so my Mother won't let me out unless I've got my ...

It's....good. It didn't wow me, of course, but you made your intention of simply writing a poem and forgetting about trying to pin it down with punctuation and structure, ect, ...

So this is amazingly accurate, and superbly well written. I can't find too many faults with it, besides, I don't really want to rip it to shreds seeing as I ...

Thanks. I thought there was something wrong with my computer.

I agree with Vernon, a tad to shouty for my liking. But between, and indeed within the lines there is real potiental. Some great imagery, good word choice and rhyming ...

We have the 11 plus in Northern Ireland. It sorts out whether you go to a Grammar or secondary school normally. I go to a very good Grammar, one of ...