Eimear

I agree with bubblewrapped, if you were simply writing this piece for your own creative enjoyment, I think you would have had less problems with it's rigidity. It's a gripping ...

Hey 'Stoney. Long time no see. Actually, I don't think we've met all at before. So hello! I'm Eimear. Good lyrical poem. You really had room to express yourself in ...

Welcome to YWS! Before I go on to look at your poem, I would like to ask you to take a quick look at the Rules and Regulations we have ...

My sister went to see this film and told me she hated it. Knowing her, I knew she just has bad taste. It's the most colourful, honest, funny, life affirming ...

Hello, Onthemound21! Welcome to YWS. Just a quick reminder before I take a look at your poem for you, we do have Rules and Regulations that must be read. You ...

I’ve lost all my poetry. Not even a little bit is left, from when I rise to the dawn birds fall drowsy, nothing untoward happens to me. Not a note, ...

Disgusting.

What do we think? A serious pandemic or is it going to be all under control?

Crowd baiting is an abomination. Omission is even worse.

The silence on the street forty eight hours later was wrong from the moment I became aware of it. An alien presence of hush and unease seeped in from the ...

A story in Other Fiction? Would be thrilled if you took a look at it.

It all started last summer. When I was on the edge. I’d been outside for a good half hour, standing against the railings that separated Globe Street, my neighbourhood from ...

Hello, I'm Eimear. I make a point of not reading the previous critiques, for an irrational fear that I might subconsciously copy what the person before me has already said- ...

I’m blocked until I open the window and in you come, slipping in with the rain. Back again, my naughty friend, to put your bad, bad thoughts into my brain. ...

If you want to show your character having conflicting thoughts- maybe have them lie to people? Like, have a dialogue with a person, but then an internal monologue with totally ...