Eimear

This is dripping in teenage angst. Except a good type of angst. The sort we can all indentify with, I think...maybe I've interpretated it wrong. I hope I haven't- because ...

Purple is a good colour. Go with that!

This is the sort of thing I love. The type of poem that you can easily imagine yourself in, feeling these types of emotions, such as staring out a window ...

Haha. Surprisingly good snippet. However I think you should develop this further into something bigger than that to give the true title of 'poem'. I just seems to leave the ...

I'm sorry, but you certainly haven't crossed the finish line in this piece. Number one, there's no use of punctuation whatsoever, which makes it a dull and surprisingly difficult read. ...

Hmmm, I did like this very much, I have to say. I could really relate to the speaker, you know? It spoke to me. However I disliked the constant use ...

This is really very good. Although I agree with what Suzanne said about you maybe trying to be over poetic at times, therefore losing your thread a little. Other than ...

Even when neglected, it manages to flourish within itself. It could survive without air, rhythm, soul or thought, because it’s in every movement we make, affirming itself again. Breathing. It ...

1. Yes. God is love. I am a devout Catholic, as a matter of fact. 2.Read the yellow pages backwards. I think you will be pleasantly surprised! 3.Nope. 4. Ask ...

I understand that the Burma officals are getting rather edgy about their horrific regime being broadcast throughout the world, but there is no excuse. Simple as. Get the help in. ...

Hey, welcome to the YWS! Just remember to take a moment to read the rules and guidlines, as they will answer any questions or problems you may have in the ...

Haha. This is bloody brilliant! Seriously, it's not even a human's voice and it's so completely orginal you make my own writing seem stilted and usless. I can't really add ...

The whole poem strives on it's supberb imagery. I mean, wow. It's great. As soon as I began reading a picture formed in my head and I knew what you ...

The errors and lack of punctuation really ruined it for me, I'm afraid. You lacked any real seriousness for you poetry in failing to notice the mistakes. They will cost ...

Me too!