Eimear

I heard people talk about this, and I'm just wondering, what in your opinion are the essentials for a writer? Apologises if someone has raised this before. Here's some of ...

I think this would work better if you dropped the ryhme, it's holding your thoughts and ideas back too much. You've got good descriptions, but focusing too hard on trying ...

Mark's pointed out most of the errors, and my opinion of your work hasn't changed since Chapter One. This is gathering momentum excellently. I can sense a dark atmosphere smouldering, ...

Hey, I thought I'd lost the link but this was relatively easy to find. Thanks for giving me it-because this was an interesting read! Very impressive. Forget all the grammer, ...

It's a thought provoking read- not life changing but not specific to one person, so I can relate it to myself. Nice job. I'm wondering is it right to put ...

It's our old gangsta friend! I'm happy to say that this poem was definately for me. It's got a great fitting title, supberb structure and rythmn, and the rhyming scheme ...

Ok, so here's the review as promised. I'll try to make it as in-depth as I can. So I liked the story, and the dialouge for the most part is ...

So I'm guessing that the 'Lake' is love or passion conceptualized into a physical thing- i.e plunging into the depths ect. It's good. Not anything to write home about but ...

Big Daddy? Or Big cousin Keltus?

Respect, dude. You've caused a strir, that's for sure. I don't know, there's aspects of this piece that are for me- the irony towards the end is good, almost hillarious ...

I think this is great-- and It's exactly how I felt today. After reading it I felt sort of better...however there are some issues which need to be raised. Aswell ...

Nice Nate! I'm not old enough to join, but I'll be thinking of poems to add. Eimear

Hey, I'm Eimear. Name: Aaron Disney Age: 17 Occupation: Student Description: thin, pale skin, grey eyes and birthmark on left cheek Attitude: Cynical, dark, funny Activities: Hanging the streets, earn

*Feels enlightened* Many thanks.

What type of powers does Big Sister have? I've read them...but can anyone explain it in lamens terms?