Eimear

Rising, rippling currents catch your fallen words on wind, the rushing of the sea deafening; ‘Come with me, love- come with me!’ I shake my head, staring up at you, ...

Wow- sorry but I can't think of a better word to describe how I feel about reading this, (ironically, there is a word for that situation which escapes me at ...

It's definately different. I've never quite read anything like it...and you set the scene well in italics. I don't really want to rip it to shreds saying that it's not ...

I got the opposite vibe- I felt that the rhyme was great, sort of deviated from the fixed form but good nonetheless. I loved this, a real gem of a ...

Wow, a lot of different phliosophical ideas co-exsisting in one poem. I actually needed to read it a few times to make sense of it. Not sure if that's a ...

Haha, funny! Wise quotation.

Once there was a monster who spoke only about bubble gum. He thought that he should take a lesson about bubbles and rubber bands. He could jump over the river ...

Surprisingly good. I new I was onto something good when I read the first line: The candles are lit for you, make a wish, make it dark. Your imagery to ...

So I'm relatively new to Storybooks, but I thought I'd try my hand at it and see if I'm any good in setting one up. So, basically I thought about ...

OK, so I agree; it's a bit depressing however underwhelming at the same time. Questions can be effective in poetry but too many will just leave the reader feeling mildly ...

Questions arise in my mind As each moment pass by. I would put a comma here Reminding me how little I know Who am I ? Or Why am I ...

I don't really think there's a point...I mean, it just is.

Hey Jenni- I never paid attention in math for the duration of my lessons. I'm very happy that they're over hehe. So I liked this, the title engaged my interest. ...

Hey, D. Just got a spare minute. So the mystery girl is upon us? I like her already. She seems...strong. Good portrayal of her character here: So, I don't really ...

Hey! Did you mean this was your Nano '07? From last year? Just curious...anyways- Ok so I enjoyed reading this. One thing I can give you is your originalitly. I've ...