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Funny, Nate :)

Wahh. Ok. I'll answer the questions and then resume the story. 1. I think I should put my foot down on this one. The solider's are men. 2.The cut-off date ...

36. Use! Lots! Of! Exclamation! Points! In! All! Your! Work!

Ah- the great poet from earlier! Well, well, well, on a creative up at moment? This was quite good, not mind blowing or very serious, but it was quite realistic ...

Hey CK, how're things? I often feel crits are very inpersonal. So hello! Ok, here goes.. Somewhere from a forgotten corner, (* All your lines open with capitals, change this) ...

I'm not sure, I'm all for feminism but the character's are solider's in WWI.

DO NOT ENTER I warn you, beware You’re entering the room of a teenage girl Her private domain, her forbidden lair (full stop!) If you come in unannounced She will ...

**Nicholas McEwan, Officer I followed behind, my gun almost slipping in my hands from sweat, or something else that was ozzing out of my palms. Blood. Bang. I shot out ...

Vernon wrote: Time of Incident: around 10am GMT Browser: Firefox Template: Default Describe What Happened: When I did a long quote in a new topic about a contest on Wordclay, ...

"It was a fucking bullet, that's what it was," growled a grim voice from behind. Nicohlas seized Sterling by the arm, and for a moment he seemed to stare, mesmerised ...

Commando588- this is a very hard piece to read. Not just because of the odd structure, but that there are too many ideas left unsolved in the first part to ...

I think we can. Alright, I'll set the scene...perhaps it should be World War One instead? I thought they could be situated in a French town- West Outre, fighting the ...

Whoa Icaruss - this is really very raw and graphic. You've won a gold star already by sheer nerve, I've never read a piece like this. Am I right in ...

This is actually very good- sorry, I sounded surprised. But it was great in my opinion, and it seems like you put a lot of hard work and thought into ...

This is very strong, very strong indeed. It seems like your poetry always has a solid backbone..if you understand? It's not all airy-fairy. It's real. It's raw. So I loved ...