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Re: I'd do anything- BBC
She was robbed! We were robbed! I really didn't want it to be Jodie!
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Dear Mr. Writer
So you want to be a writer? Well- show me what you’ve got. Place it in the slush pile, and be warned-- I’ve seen quite a lot. What’s this about ...
May 31, 2008 -
Re: Happy Birthday, Nate!
Many happy returns, Nate!
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Arabian girl want new friends
Wow- you sound far more exciting than me. So what d'you like to write? What are your favourite books? Hope you're here to stay! Eimear
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Unfair.
Hey Yuki, and welcome to YWS- I hope you stick around. I see you're from Canada- what's it like? That's a country I've always wanted to visit. Now- to the ...
May 30, 2008 -
Re: Sinking
Hey, so I can see from your poem that you did indeed have some problems. However you persevered and tried to write it, and it showed. It almost had a ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: I do what Death cannot.
Ah- Bravo! *Claps Welcome to YWS! Just remember to take a few minutes to look at the Rules and Guidelines - we expect each member to do 2 reviews before ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: The Night of the Death of His Father
Hmmm. Once again I'm struggling to understand your complex poetry, and once again I'm thoroughly impressed. This poem is obviously full of raw emotion, in which the speaker is trying ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Understand Me
Juncboks- I don't really quite know what to say about this piece. Firstly, on YWS we usually steer clear from trying to explain poetry beforehand as a famous poet once ...
May 28, 2008 -
Re: Marmalade!
Why yes Mark, I think she just did. Pure class anyway! Keep it country!
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Home
My main problem with this is, (although I'm in the same boat as the other reviewers in that I liked it) was the telling rather than showing aspect of it. ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: To the Sea
Yes I agree with both Gahks and Rebirth. A marvellous poem about the sea. Your poetic voice seems strangely well developed for someone of your age. That's a good thing, ...
May 27, 2008 -
Re: Aedo's Review House
I've got a poem?
May 26, 2008 -
Re: An ode to those who dream
Don’t you often wonder of how those who have been born with the gift of dreams, are prepared to rip the life God gave them, completely at the seams? Do ...
May 26, 2008 -
Re: I'd do anything- BBC
I know, I know- But as an Irish girl I'm adamant on this one.... JESSE TO WIN!
May 26, 2008
