Eimear

Hey, I also really liked this. The structure was sound and you presented a subject in a new and refreshing way. It was pretty unique and without being too corny, ...

Markets in sandy places they trade and make a sale, with coins that turn rags to riches, with oil and currencies of diamonds and bullets. A shake of a hand ...

Hey Kylan. I happen to be your biggest fan. Bet you didn't know that. Now, here's what I thought. This is like something I'd read for an exam on poetry. ...

Hey, I'm Eimear. Pleased to meet you. Someone who rhymes! *High fives* I often write rhyming poetry. It's pretty hard to get right, so I salute you. Usually people warn ...

My characters, to me are real. End of.

The very first word kind of draws me in. The name is original, at least, to me, and makes me think of faraway adventure stories. The hair falling out in ...

Make it mine all that you hold and see for those things you own always belonged to me. The night you were born even though I was still a babe ...

Hey June. It's a poem- but you don't have to write anything very long in terms of review. I'd just appreciate some comments on how well it reads and what ...

A/N This was written because I'm so upset about leaving school. It's pretty messy in terms of rhyme and rhythm because it's originally for the guitar, but I'm hoping with ...

We didn’t notice the murder beneath the smile, like you notice it in one with a shabby suitcase who struggles to use French lazily, who ‘can’t see to read’ even ...

Hey Crysi. I'm Eimear. I don't think we've met before. Allow me to take a look at your poem. What I liked about it was that it took me more ...

I agree with tnme22- this was a pretty decent song. The hurt was brought across in a less obvious way- that is, you kept the clichés on the down low ...

Wow. Forcefully delivered! I can almost feel the frustration and restlessness from here. I liked the concept, it thought it was okay, but there's such a thing as not hammering ...

Hey Suzanne. You won't believe what just happened to me. I just wrote a review to this- and then my computer decided to go to sleep and shut itself down. ...

I’m lost in the crowd again Got to start breathing, gotta count to ten And try to convince myself to stay. Who am I kidding, they can’t keep me away! ...