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Re: The Mask
The fact that you've so honestly posted your true feelings and thoughts up like this makes me just love it. I mean, if I was reviewing another poem with a ...
Jun 3, 2008 -
Re: Welcome to the Desert of the Real
This is another gem that I wait for from you. I love the fact that you've practically threw away the rulebook that the rest of us seem to follow and ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
Last september. I've finished the book but it needs editing. I don't think anyone will ever read it, and right now I've started my second book which I'm planning to ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: That sun don't burn the earth
Don’t you ever wonder, how much your stupid life’s worth? 'Cause in my world of downtown city streets, that sun don’t even burn the earth. Trying to imagine, what it’s ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Here I am
Ok, this poem is a little juvenile. It seems you've missed the point of what Dramatic Poetry truly is. I would suggest even reading the sticky 'what is dramatic poetry?' ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: First Chapter of my Musical
**This is a re-write of my first pieces 'A Bad Person'. I've decided to make the piece into a Musical but I haven't decided on a new title yet.** The ...
Jun 2, 2008 -
Re: Don't Hide.
Hey, I liked the concept of these questions and issues being raised by a confused and possibly disillusioned teenage boy. But unfortunately this is as far as it goes for ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: All Users Will Need 2 Pass A Grammar Test
Husit? I used excellent England all times!
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Reading 'Popular' Books
There's an author in Ireland, I don't know if you've heard of the film, Hilary Swank starred in it who wrote 'P.S I Love you'- and her books are very ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: The Abyss
Man do I agree with all of Gahks points. He's pretty much said all I wanted to say about this piece- yes, the grammatical errors as they let the piece ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: I'm taking a big risk
Guys, I really can't thank you all enough for this. I went into a kind a frenzy eureka moment last night- I didn't exactly jump out of the bath and ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Ugh!!!
I was never very good at numbers. My eldest sister really is old- she's 35. When I was born, she was 18. And when her daughter was born a while ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: Emotional Haze
I agree with some of the other reviewer's points. This is very vague- yet surprisingly confusing. The way I see it, poetry needs to be written and presented so that ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: The Lark
Hey Mayfyre, how's it going for you? You seem to be adapting well to YWS life. I really enjoy it when I see you've posted another poem. The first time ...
Jun 1, 2008 -
Re: I'm taking a big risk
Ok, so I've finally had what I think is called the moment of epiphany. Otherwise known as everything I've learnt about writing so far and everything I am has come ...
May 31, 2008
