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So Demeter's nit-picked this sufficiently enough, so I won't pull you up on anything like that. What I will say is that the imagery in this piece is quite weak, ...

A friend of my sister's wrote this an it's truly amazing. 'The Pack' by Tom Pow Let's hear it for the little people!

It is an interesting theme, and done subtly enough to make me like it as well. But please please dot your 'I's in your work. It's like handing in a ...

This is very short. How perceptive of me you might say! *Bows I'm not sure about this piece. I'm personally a sucker for a good, quirky rhyme at the end ...

Okay, let's jump straight in! "Let's go somewhere; The tide can take us there." Away from a repetitious city Where no one subsists like us-- The witty. You sigh for ...

Hey, Snoink's pretty much outlined what you can do to help this poem along. As regards to your poetry, well there's plenty of things that can help you progress. I ...

Hey- here's a poem, only if you fancy it, though! Love and food in advance: xxx

I don’t know how to explain it, but it’s my job so I’ll try, I’ll try to tell you what it’s like when I do my thing; when I fly. ...

Wow, a lot of emotion in this poem. A heck of a lot of dare I say, bitterness as well. In any case, I guess I believed the speaker had ...

First tip- try not to explain your poetry. A famous poet once said 'Good poetry will explain itself' So now onto the poem. It's great that you've chosen something that ...

Aww this is awesome, nice job! I feel like such a horrible, narrow-minded person trying to nit-pick this, but it's only because I do it out of 'True Love' for ...

Because I am completely comfortable with my grammatical ineptness, let me be the first to say that I saw nothing wrong with BB's name. I only hope that you can ...

People don't tell me my stories are cliched, they just say that they can't understand what's going on in them. I think I show too much and alienate the reader ...

It’s a bitter kiss of fate, a low blow once received, It’s as bitter as a salty sting, after all that you’ve achieved. It aches in groans of millions, but ...

This is all very mathematical for me. Hmm, I would suggest just taking your time with poetry and reading a lot of it. In my own experience, most of my ...