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Claire!

Wow, this is definitely gory. But you gave away too much, and told us far too much for me to think -'I really care about this speaker'. Let me level ...

I loved this! It's very graphic and sensual, I could feel the speaker's warmth and feelings of being smothered by the season. I especially liked the expert use of personification ...

Simply open up the window, and let it fall or rise in flight. If you cup you ear and wait. you’ll see if it’s worth the pain, If you should ...

It seems in this piece like you've managed to scratch the surface, but to a very deep pond. Ahh, terrible imagery and metaphors on my own part so apologies. But ...

I agree with all of Mathlete's comments. However, a quiet word of advice. Writing 'I would like at least 10 reviews' is a little off-putting to a reviewer, although I ...

I should be happy. After all, I have met real city teenagers and their anger – at least one of them. In a way, I'm content because of the new ...

Bravo my good friend. Excellent, you seemed to hit nearly all of my boxes with this piece. There were some fabulous concepts raised that made me sit back and go, ...

I would, to begin with ask every person in the group to write a short descriptive piece- on anything. Then everyone could compare and get to know each individual's writing ...

And thoroughly deserved! Big hugs!

Title pretty self explanatory, apologies in advance if someonehas already exhausted this subject. I really can't decide mine- but I suppose it would have to be 'The Darkling Thrush' by ...

Ahh, Bravo! I loved this, especially born by the fact that I stumbled upon it by surprise. It's a great theme, coupled with good imagery (although there's always room for ...

Nate- where did you get that picture? Because it looks uncannily like my own house!

You make me sad. You make me cry. You make me want to die. I sit here all brokenhearted. In this day, I wish was departed. But then, I remember ...

I've just realised that you're new. Welcome to YWS! Now, onto the poem. A vow of hope A leap of faith This world is alive, We all go out We ...