Eimear

This is very honest and you really laid the speaker's feeling bear. By doing this the somewhat raw language becomes something quite beautiful. Can I see this as a song? ...

In the darkest light of day tonight, I’m going away. Where my soul already plays along a silver sea that sways. Underneath a golden kingdom, I’m going to a place ...

Hello! I don't have much time to write this- but I really wanted to leave a comment to let you know I read it and enjoyed it. And it's always ...

I have more paperbacks than hardbacks. A lot more. When I'm rich and famous all of them will be hardbacks.

As a psychology AS level student, I've been taught that there are three explanations for a mental disorder such as depression. Biological- Genes make people 'pre-disposed' to get the illness. ...

Ooo...Latin? Methinks? -That is an actual word. I read it in 'The Tempest' by Shakespeare. Hehe. How's life? Well this is very intriguing indeed. I can tell that a lot ...

Hello. I've been dreadfully tied up with work at the moment, but I promised myself to get some reviews done today in all the madness. So here I am! And ...

Hello! Indeed, *nods head approvingly* this is very good. It ticked a heck off alot of boxes that I look for in poetry. It was very frank and honest, not ...

Change moves within us It travels across souls like clouds whispering over an old sky. Lies begin to turn the truth until you can’t look anyone in the eye. Why ...

Tonight my life takes it’s last sigh over the clear skies, where the clouds are high. Where birds soar over the golden glen, I let the breeze cool my face, ...

Hello D, of course I'll critique your poem. I actually thought I'd reviewed it before, but I must have read it late one night before going to bed. So here ...

Hello! I see that you're relatively new, so welcome to YWS! Just while you're reading this I'd like to invite you to go take a look at the Rules and ...

I think you could gain depth by basing some aspects of his character on a real life, flesh-and-blood person that you either know very well- his laugh might be like ...

N.B. In 1896 the Irish musician Percy French wrote a poem called the Mountains of Morne about the tallest Mountains in Northern Ireland in the seaside town of Newcastle where ...

Hello! To begin with you tell far too much. That's a big mistake to start with in the first stanza, because it puts people off immediately. It's a shame because ...