Ehaynes1

Thought it was great although I think it do with another verse

Manchester or London are going to be best for nightlife. Just as a warning though the universities you have chosen are very prestigious and very hard to get into. I ...

Its good I like pace of the poem although like another user commented I would perhaps thinking about changing the ending as that could be improved. Good Job though

The f word not really used as sarcastic. The reason I used it was to hopefully to try and shock the reader as the character is shocked and it can ...

The charcoal black of the night sky spread over the town, a velvet blanket, covering those who walked below in impenetrable darkness. The cold stone buildings of the town soared ...

It's great good building of tension. Like another reviewer said I would'nt add the extra descriptions in the brackets it makes it seem like an afterthought in the description of ...