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Re: Chronicles of Life and Death: Dark Secrets - Prologue
Heys, I'm EgyptianGoddessSarah, and I'll be reviewing your story today. This is my first review, I'm sorry if it isn't much help. This looks like a really good story, the ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: A Rose For The Dead (Chapter 2)
Thanks again for the review. After reading through it again, I've seen soo many mistakes. Its quite interesting how easily I could over-look them. Alot of my friends love the ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: First Book: A Rose For The Dead (Chapter 1)
Thank you both for the help, its much apreshated. I can't believe I'm made so many mistakes, Sorry bout that. I'm going through it now, untill the bell goes for ...
Jun 15, 2010 -
Re: A Rose For The Dead (Chapter 2)
Beautiful colours of gold, green and orange flew across the room and into the hip high pile by the door. Among the colours, a maid of fair hair and curves ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: First Book: A Rose For The Dead (Chapter 1)
Hey everyone, I'm Sarah, I've newly joined this site to see if anyone can help me with my book. My teachers have said that, "I have great ideas, but you ...
Jun 7, 2010
