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Hold that thought on entering the tombs, Grif--there's a little more I hoped to get across before we entered--maybe one of the priests has a journal, and he's detailed their ...

A small but significant note about Seraph, at the moment. Something is different about him. He's on edge. Anxious. Nervous, even. Normally he is very calm and collected--and he always ...

Is anyone going to crit my work? I'm not going to continue my book until I get critique so CRIT!!! For future reference--when you order people to critique, they are ...

Seraph I looked to Becky and nodded. "Yes--for now. The High Magus was not among these killed. Be on your toes, for I've a feeling this is far from over," ...

Um....yeah...if you don't put personal info on your page....you can't really be stalked, can you?

*salutes* Later--I don't I need say more ;)

That particular decision should be ebtween Dan and whoever, I think :) Let us know what you decide :) Ok, a battle update. 9/12 elves are down. (Henry killed 2, ...

The immediate danger momentarily gone, I leapt to my feet without another word to Finn, and bolted toward the direction of the priest who had cast the ball of fire ...

I kinda like the kid, actually--very stark conrast to nice, quiet, mild mannered kids we normally read about. The writing, however, was a little off. Spelling and grammar both need ...

Two things right off the bat, before I read into it further-- Double space your paragraphs, like I'm doing here, and give this a good read throgh and add in ...

Meh--you're right. Which is a very large bummer, because there were some really good ideas, there. Damnation. DQ, Jenna, Grif and I were all in chat last night, and we ...

Gave you my thoughts already in private...bujt I just wanted to be the first to comment :P

I'm a hustler, baby.

It would work--especially with Rio's backing.

1) this battle is not the end of the storybook--it's just a skirmish. There's still a ton more. Or has everyone simply forgotten that this is the tomb of the ...