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'Please don't--I didn't choose this!' I get it constantly--and only once did I believe it. It still didn't matter. --Hunter Wulf Are you more externally or internally focused?

He clutched to her head tightly, and brought it to his face. “But one never knows what they’ll find back stage, do they?” This sounds very awkward to me. Instead ...

I saw the foolish, uncharacteristically brave paladin rush forward to attack the golem, only to have his blade strike against the enchanted rock and adamantine that made up the thing's ...

Thanks for the comments Dove, Sean. Dove--this is not the end of the story, by any means. It's just the part that I have editted, so far. I'll be posting ...

Then don't post it in the literary forums. This section is for ACTUAL writing. And since you admitedly did not want this to be a real poem...*moved to randomness*

Doubt it. The last one was garbage.

*laughs* Paolini is nowhere near a "god" of fantasy. Not even a demi-god, as it were. He's like...a smudge.

...Don't we snuggle Tigers and stuff in Zoos? Just saying.

Let me start with some questions. As I'm reading this, here's what I was thinking: Mage? What mage? they have a mage? why? A tunic and boots, but no pants? ...

7/10 Very cool, something about the colors intrigues me.

Teehee, thanks. I try XD

Back to blonde. I kinda miss my old hair...but then again, what self respecting thug is going to be scared of a blonde haired, blue eyed kid from SoCal? --Hunter ...

Detail is key. Everything has a purpose. If it doesn't...make it.

Kite Runner. Ew.

I think it would be excellent if, for each holiday, we had a very pimply dressed monkey. Like a Santa Monkey.