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Not bad! I like the concept (what can I say, I'm a sucker for this kind of stuff), but I think the delivery could us some work. Critics have a ...

"You realize of course that going by 'Angie' automatically makes your name pronounced 'Angelina', right?" I was in no mood to mess with these two. With a dismissal wave, I ...

As shaken as I was from the psycho at the Fray, Joann was a surprisingly refreshing distraction. We'd only met a few times before, and each time she invariably threw ...

The second brewskie was even better than the first. It still wouldn't be enough to get rid of the bitterness in my mouth caused by Alain , but it sure ...

"Man, forget those guys. Let's get some real fun." Mev and I climbed into the Bronco. "Headin' to the Fury. Cool?" I said. "Anything's better than frickin' IHOP, man," he ...

Yeah....whoever is outside the General's room when Dreffan leaves is gonna die. Better Sighard is the replacement, rather than the guy who gets his throat slit by Dreffan.

You double space paragraphs so your post is more easily read... Attention Everyone Who Was In Chat --Bubbles, Brad, Jenna, and Insanity: Post as planned. Order is Bubbles, Brad, Insanity, ...

I pulled open the door to the IHOP and let Mev take it, to hold it for Adara. The place was busy, but not crowded. Already I could taste those ...

Either way. Whatever you want to do will work :)

1am, yes...though that' merely the first recorded case in the area.

go for it.

Day 0, 7.27pm "I'll drive," I muttered to Mev and Adara, gesturing to my old Bronco. "Where are we going?" Adara asked. "To IHOP, right?" "...You just said we weren't--" ...

If you have any ideas as to who you want your character to know and be acquainted with. This is rather important, so please do so ASAP.

I just think it's funny, lol. I'm not that worried about it.

"If I have a mark on my record involving firearms, would that stop me from buying one?" Kevin was quickly losing his patience with this idiot. What do you think, ...