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That could work--I like the lower case i's and the capitalized "Hers"...but not so much the all caps "HERS." The repetetiveness is good, don't change it at all!

From what I can tell, skeptik, "She," "The Girl," and "I" are all the same person, and "Her" is a separate person. I like the poem, but anyone that knows ...

it's easier if you already have an idea of what you want written, becuase then there wont be any radical changes......

Good, TBR--disturbing becuase I know what it's about, but great stuff--I love your style, as always.

sure they can!

I cannot believe I just read that last sentence--thats totally new to me, you've never said anything like it before.

But we're getting married, too, Hunter! *falls over* since when are you a polygamist!?

^ ^ ^ stole my comment

lol yeah My turn soon!!!

*grin fades* oh yeah...forgot. *stops dancing*

^ ^ ^ Is undaunted by persuasion...

I hate blatant ignorance I hate self absorbance (guilty! *raises hand*) I hate arrogance (Also guilty!)

^ ^ ^ Is a true friend

*sneaks up behind Ari, pulls her into a dance*

*raises eyebrow* Maybe later--when I'm not picking up arms and legs and other limbs...