EdgarAllenPoet

The glow from the computer washed over Jeremy, making the dark bedroom behind him seem ten times blacker. The reflection from the screen was visible in his glasses, exposing the ...

Awh dang! Dreamy, That would be cool... Make it so we have no idea. ... Talk about a template for our imagination!

This is awesome! It leaves enough mystique to keep you thinking about it and interested, long after the story is over. Loved it :] The only thing I would suggest ...

Yes, I'm sorry, I didn't have time to edit it before I posted it. Please forgive the many typos and grammatical errors! :] thanks for the feedback!

WOW! I really like your style of dialogue! It works well. :) The story was great!

I watched the way his head fell apart. The pieces reminded me of those from a puzzle, but sharper. The shards of skull pressed themselves into the cold mud around ...