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Re: Excerpt from WWII Novel
I really liked the story. I usually don't read short stories on the internet, but I guess since I ADORE WWII I liked it even more. Getting to my constructive ...
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Re: Thoughts
Your poem was great. If you really want my advise, the only thing I could say is that it sounded more like a quote than a poem. OK! :) See ...
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Re: Please Mommy
I liked to poem. I really liked how you kept the reader guessing what you were saying until the end. Well, at least I understood at the end. Very good! ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Breath me in
I have to admit with everyone else is saying about your spelling mistakes. I just have to tell you to keep up the good work and maybe double check your ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Too Late
Depressed as I wait for a new life to take its place and rescue me from these negative thoughts that are growing and destroying all other thoughts in my head ...
Jun 23, 2010 -
Re: Inside
I loved your poem 'Inside me'. It really expresses your emotions you can't show. I just love it and I hope others do too. I liked how your lines in ...
Jun 23, 2010
