EdgarAllanPoe

Hey, I'm Chardinay. It was good! I've never seen a poem full of quotes. :D A poem doesn't have to be made up of rhymes. I personally LOVE poems that ...

This is a great poem. With my poetic mind, I would agree with the last stanza but my regular mind wouldn't. :D A lot of people corrected you with your ...

I loved your poem. I liked your last stanza the most. How you were freeing yourself from your past that's haunting you. I like! :D There's nothing bad I can ...

Hey! My name is Chardinay. I think that poem was great. I liked that you said you still liked her even though what she did. :D Very clever! I'd like ...

I look up into the night sky, Gazing in such fright. I try to scream out, But all you hear is a mans battle cry. Who's is it, I ponder ...

I don't think this poem is confusing. It was really sad and I loved how you put your murder into it and gave me a picture of your death. I ...

Wow. That was really cool. I love it!

My mind is really strange at this point of time. Right now it is to. I can't explain it but they just come up. I woke up this morning with ...

I loved your story! Very awesome.

OK. Thank you! That does help. I didn't really like this poem, to tell you the truth. It was just one of the many piles of poems I had and ...

I loved this prologue! I can't wait for chapter one! I especially loved the beginning as to where you used the details of the night so good. I'm jealous! :D ...

OK. Thank you for the tip! It was just hard getting it all out with the same stanzas. When I was typing this, I felt there were some things I ...

Really random! I like it! :D

You weigh the pain. Error returns. Your eyes drown in the water. You've spent your whole life in the water; below. No revenge though, You're wise enough to know your ...

Hi. I'm Chardinay, I actually would like to know what it is about. It was really good!