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Re: The Death of Love.
Hey! I like it. I loooooveed the description of the hair and skin. Man, I wish you used more of a description though! That would be so awesome!!! Keep it ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: The eyes of another person
Your number one problem here is the complete lack of rhythm or flow. Your lines are choppy and varying in size for no real reason, and it's difficult to read ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Wiping Away My Tears
I thought it was cool. It is kind of like "The Bells" by Edgar Allan Poe. :) Even though I didn't understand for you the reasons why you were crying ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Secrets
Liked it! I admit, stories about ghosts are really weird, but this one was great!
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Burns of the Worst Degree
Your song sounded like a poem to tell you the truth. Well, songs are poetry, but when I think of a song, I see someone singing it. I don't see ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Portraits
You have a horse! You live on a farm! That is so cool!!! I wish I lived on a farm! Awesome!
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: A First Attempt
Hey, Jabber! Nice poem! It felt like I was reading Robert Frost! I liked how you were writing a poem about how you didn't know what to write about. You ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Dearly Beloved
Hey! I liked the story and I think Poe would too. :) I liked how you didn't really put anybody else in the story, just the man and the wife. ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Perish Alone
I like the setting you put, describing you in battle. I just don't think perish went with it. I mean perish means expire and dead, but you could have used ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The Flames of Hope
I liked your poem. I liked how you used the cloud to express your feelings(if that's what you were trying to do)! Genius. I liked it, & I liked the ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: To Hell And Back
This is a great poem. i think it would be great though if you kept the part where you said that you noticed him eating your soul to sum it ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: A Nighttime Lullaby
I really loved this poem! Honestly, it had no hidden message or anything behind it, but I still thought the poem itself was written beautifully. You did a good job ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry
Emo poetry can become good because it shows emotion. its not childish, it's just expressing how they feel about the world. Good or emo poetry, someone's going to like it. ...
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Name Me Some Poets!
Also Michael D'Angelo!
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Name Me Some Poets!
Poe :D ,Shel Silverstein, Robert Frost, Shakespere, Dr.Seuss, Langston Hughes, ect. Look up more on Google or Bing! -Chardinay
Jul 13, 2010