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Re: You won
I like!
Sep 3, 2010 -
Re: finish me off
I guess I can't say it was phenomenal, because your speaking the truth, but I will say that poem the great! It was very direct and it let a lot ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Cutlery Can Do More.
I liked this piece. Deadly, cool, mysterious. Just the way that catches my attention. I like this poem a lot. I like how the wife is so depressed and ... ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Athena, Your Hatred Stays Strong
Hey, good poem! I love Athena and Greek mythology. I just think that was so cool. I like! It sounded like a real person from that time era would say ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Butterflies
Hey buddy! This poem was so sweet. I like how you portrayed yourself as the butterfly. That is clever. It's like a children's story. I admit, the end stanza I ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Sing to Me
*These are all senerios I've come up with of murder and put in a poem. I'm really bright and don't think like this truly. It just pops up in my ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: Process of Clarity
Put me in a box Burn my memories. Because these memories Somehow are controlling me. What I wanted to say Built up inside So my conversation may never end. I ...
Aug 21, 2010 -
Re: My Eyes See You.
I liked how you didn't rhyme. It was great! I liked how you were hiding in the shadows watching them. Your good. Keep it up!
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: [Untitled]
I thought the pace was great. It was what a poem should be. The vocabulary, the pace, the expression. Everything. It was a good poem and you deserve the great ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: A Divine Love
I liked it! I like all of your poetry, actually to tell you the truth. KEEP IT UP! I'm going to follow you!
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Im "Just"
I liked it. I just don't think you should have put the hole lazy thing. That sort of threw me off, actually.
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: Breathing Insanity
Awesome! Loved it!
Jul 23, 2010 -
Re: The violinist
Personally, I liked your story. I didn't know you had a romantic side to you! That was great. The only part I didn't like was that she kissed him so ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: A Dream of Death
LIked how you repeated yourself at the end. I liked the poem and I like your username. Keep up the good work!
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Trying to find myself
I liked your poem. It makes people relate to it. Grammar and punctuation aren't problems nessasary to correct for me. It just shows that they were maybe thinking off the ...
Jul 20, 2010
