Echolair

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! BRAVO!

Max is a darling! :)) I loved it. I won't even start on the typo's and capitalizations coz this is just too cute! Keep it up! ;D

LOL. Thanks for the critiques. two things though, i dont write with a set standardized type of writing nor do i follow some style of some sort. i guess i ...

Hello dear reader. :) Got here some poem I wrote a year ago, praising the wonderful entity of the Great Holy One. :) It's from the love and fire burning ...

Oh. Well that wasnt really what i expected you guys to think of it. What i meant was that i just want to tell people that its not really in ...

Uh, a bit of both i guess. Neither of them seemed convincingly sympathetic [or whatnot] to whatever kind of audience there is. Something lacks and seemed rushed in version 1 ...

AH! *motions for you to come by* *HUGS* Such a butterflies-in-tummies initiator. :D Swear I almost....almost fell for your art boy. Nice job at writing. :) Hats off! =maybe you ...

I love you already. -_- alter-ego: will drink to that. pirate personality: arr. Howdy. [dang, how weird in one day can i be?] Let's try that again Howdy, I'm new ...

Howdy. Here's an English WC our teacher made us cram for the last quarter. sigh. LOL. I don't really know which genre it belongs to however, I pray you get ...

Hey! Haha. I wasn't really into the whole writer shebang. Not an aspiring one either. I appreciate the critique regarding the punctuations and all. Very observant of you. ;p anyway, ...

Loose girl: Lol. Changed it. And ive already sent you a message regarding this baleful style of writing for the first chapter and blah and blah. :x TO EVERYONE: Please ...

It was brillz! x( Awww....not really too brill for anything pro but that definitely was good! I felt how the baleful emptiness of the poem seems true. KEEP WRITING dude! ...

Awww. That last part made it all clear. That was sad. -.- Nice job! :)

Awww it's sad. But it's lovely. :) Keep writing! And yes it was a good first attempt. Read and review mine :) thanks.

Gyeah like the others have said, characters needed improvement. I sort of looked for the significance of the characters however failed to see em..maybe a lil too flat? oh well, ...