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Echolair

  • General Articles Re: I Can Only Rant

    thank you :) will try to do that ;] xxx

    Aug 9, 2009
  • General Articles Re: I Can Only Rant

    It’s getting worse each day, but we manage to put on a smile, a fake one at that. It kills me to know how he could deal with himself. He’s ...

    Aug 7, 2009
  • General Articles Re: A monotonous Grievance

    oh thank you for that!:) Actually, i didn't proofread this at all and so i forgot to edit out the commas, caps and all that jazz. But thanks for reminding ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Perfection Correction

    it sounded like something off of an emo song's chorus. it was that catchy. Prolly not the best you got so far, but it's stuck like Glue Gun on my ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • General Articles Re: A monotonous Grievance

    Not everything could be rationalized nor be explained with reasons but i KNOW IN MY HEART that EVERYTHING IS AS IS because there are reasons. These are either HIDDEN and ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Bigger Lights

    If i can kiss away your tears If i can hug away your outbursts If i can kill life’s insecurities If i can share the pain you feel If i ...

    Apr 13, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: A Summer To Remember-- Prologue

    im afraid...i didnt get any of it. O_O I felt like something was about to burst but in the end, it pushed me farther and i failed to READ what ...

    Nov 14, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Oi Pierre

    I envisioned a skinny Joe Jonas with undecided thin or think dark hue eyebrows. -_- I loved the last line though. ^^ CHASE

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: My bittersweet blueberry waffles

    Howdy! :D 'tis something i half-assed freestyled last night before i slept. I don't know why i write my poems in such an impulsive manner but oh to hell with ...

    Sep 3, 2008
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Dead Lights 2/2

    You're not happy with it? 0.o Can i like kill you right now? *Gun clicks* Applause. And oh i won't kill you, your story is too excellent I might flood ...

    Jun 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Feebly Hell You're In.

    Scribble, scribble, scribble. After reading Macbeth, i jotted poetic words that seemed to be correlated with my feelings that moment. Popped in my head, onto writing.....Enjoy! -----------------------

    Jun 24, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Selfish Man

    Reminded me of the Rich Man and Lazarus. Hm, interesting. They've all pointed out the parts where you need improvement but nonetheless i don't think a tidbit of flattery would ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Human Bullet

    The young man sat there and stared at the pristine blue sky, clutching his gas mask. Such short sentence with simple descriptions yet tells so much and reaches out amazingly. ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Innocent Blood

    me sorry. I was half-assed freestyling this,, and usually, my drafts are poetic so when i haven't studied it up a bit it does suck, grammatically speaking. Even the punctuations ...

    Jun 23, 2008
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Innocent Blood

    Something that popped into my head. I just had to write this fruit of vampire addiction so soon. :P Oh and I won't do anything with the (...) and capitalizations ...

    Jun 23, 2008


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