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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: I'm Not Asking You To Cry At My Funeral

    On second though , you probably shouldn't make a donation like that in honor of someone who didn't even put up a fight. thought I'm Not Asking You To Cry ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ask Me How I Am

    Ask Me How I am

    Dec 1, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Thousand Dancing Kites

    A Thousand Dancing Kites is a story lacking for words, but even without fine sentences, it nevertheless can convey what the story is really is. It is a story you ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Excitement

    Excitement is a simple excerpt about how one feels, using a metaphorical story of real life to convey what excitement means. It is simple but the message or rather expression ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Puppet's Dance

    I ran to grab it, but the more I ran and ran, I never got closer. Something's wrong with the underlined word. I think you mean: I ran to grab ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Smile, honey - you'll get sunshine.

    First of all, with the story changed, I think the title has became less effective. But other than that, I'm impressed. Your writing style, though simple, was good enough. And ...

    Nov 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vimini

    noth

    Nov 23, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vimini

    sORRY DOUBLE POSTED

    Nov 23, 2011
  • General Articles Re: My darling, my best friend, my everything

    This for me is how it should been written. Not sure if I'm really correct though. In my life I have driven past dozens, possibly even hundreds , of car ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Curiousity: Synonyms

    This essay is a part of a collection of essays dedicated to Discover Channel's Curiosity. CURIOSITY CURES BOREDOM, SO LIVE CURIOUS CURIOUSITY: SYNONYMS What’s with language and its deep words? ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Prologue I (Edited)

    DELETE THIS

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Puppy Love

    This kind of romance is new for me. Very unique. In fact, I can see no fault in here. Good work! I like it, it adds uniqueness to love story ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Big City Girl prologue

    I really found this interesting. Such strong characters, fine dialogues, but still I still need to crticize it. Firstly, possesive forms were not used. That is just against English grammar ...

    Aug 2, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Daddy

    You seems to be very depress. If this poem is ever based from reality, then I am so sorry for you. The poem was very touching. Easy to read but ...

    Aug 1, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Lack of Socialization

    Although it is in the General Articles section, I think it has good potential to actually be a semi-autobiographical novel. I don't know why, but the way it is written ...

    Jul 28, 2011


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler