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Re: I'm Not Asking You To Cry At My Funeral
On second though , you probably shouldn't make a donation like that in honor of someone who didn't even put up a fight. thought I'm Not Asking You To Cry ...
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: Ask Me How I Am
Ask Me How I am
Dec 1, 2011 -
Re: A Thousand Dancing Kites
A Thousand Dancing Kites is a story lacking for words, but even without fine sentences, it nevertheless can convey what the story is really is. It is a story you ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Excitement
Excitement is a simple excerpt about how one feels, using a metaphorical story of real life to convey what excitement means. It is simple but the message or rather expression ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: The Puppet's Dance
I ran to grab it, but the more I ran and ran, I never got closer. Something's wrong with the underlined word. I think you mean: I ran to grab ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Smile, honey - you'll get sunshine.
First of all, with the story changed, I think the title has became less effective. But other than that, I'm impressed. Your writing style, though simple, was good enough. And ...
Nov 30, 2011 -
Re: Vimini
noth
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: Vimini
sORRY DOUBLE POSTED
Nov 23, 2011 -
Re: My darling, my best friend, my everything
This for me is how it should been written. Not sure if I'm really correct though. In my life I have driven past dozens, possibly even hundreds , of car ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Curiousity: Synonyms
This essay is a part of a collection of essays dedicated to Discover Channel's Curiosity. CURIOSITY CURES BOREDOM, SO LIVE CURIOUS CURIOUSITY: SYNONYMS What’s with language and its deep words? ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: Prologue I (Edited)
DELETE THIS
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: Puppy Love
This kind of romance is new for me. Very unique. In fact, I can see no fault in here. Good work! I like it, it adds uniqueness to love story ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Big City Girl prologue
I really found this interesting. Such strong characters, fine dialogues, but still I still need to crticize it. Firstly, possesive forms were not used. That is just against English grammar ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Daddy
You seems to be very depress. If this poem is ever based from reality, then I am so sorry for you. The poem was very touching. Easy to read but ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: A Lack of Socialization
Although it is in the General Articles section, I think it has good potential to actually be a semi-autobiographical novel. I don't know why, but the way it is written ...
Jul 28, 2011
