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Has anyone read books by Jessica Day George? She is AMAZING. She wrote Dragon Slippers, Sun and Moon Ice and Snow, and Princess of the Midnight Ball. She did a ...

Wow. This was really cool. Do you like Tolkien? Your writing style reminded me of his. :smt001 I couldn't really find any mistakes in this, except one: But it was ...

Isn't that from the cover of a book?

Hi Jojo! This story sounds interesting, and the title sounds cool. I can't wait to see how fantasy comes into it. I couldn't find any grammar errors or anything. I ...

Thanks for reviewing, everyone! Your comments were very helpful!

I LOVED The Hunger Games! It was so addicting, I could literally not put it down! :smt001

I got this idea from a plot generator thing on this website Suggestions would be appreciated! :smt001 Note: I actually did use a magic 8-ball in the writing of this ...

Hi Clara! I'm Earthfire. Your story seems really interesting so far. The only thing I have to say is about this paragraph. “Thomas.” I was standing at the bottom of ...

My friend who is on here and also goes to my school. We were in P.E. and I guess we were talking about writing and she suggested that I join...and ...

Has anyone read Fly by Night or The Lost Conspiracy by Frances Hardinge? I just finished TLC, and I loved it! People do say that it's really long, but it's ...

I liked it! Normally, I'm not really into realistic fiction but I could relate with this book because my brother is autistic too, and I can understand how Catherine feels ...

Hi, I'm Earthfire, and I'll be your reviewer today. This story has a lot of potential. Here are just some nitpicks I found: The sound of wood against wood drew ...

Wow. I really liked this story, although it was kind of creepy. I also thought it was interesting to read a story written in second person POV. :smt001 I've never ...

This isn't really good, so suggestions would be greatly appreciated :smt001 This is actually my first time writing a short story. For some odd reason, I've been obsessed with this ...

Eliana Thomas Age: 18 Appearance: really dark brown hair which looks almost black, light blue eyes Mask and Clothing: something simple and green Gender: Female Personality: shy and fearful, kind ...