Earthfire713

This is great! You are a talented artist.

Hi RiverStar! That was beautiful. I loved how you described everything so poetically, it just brought the image of the story to my mind. There are just a few things ...

Another example of a Mary-Sue that I've found is Nancy Drew. I'm sorry if I offend anyone, but she gets kind of on my nerves because she's perfect, loved by ...

Hi LaReina! I really liked this story. You made it seem authentic and just right for the time period that you're writing about. The only suggestion that I have is ...

Hello! This story was cool. I really liked how you described the creature. I just have a few nitpicks that I found: Jamie could just see a muscular tail propping ...

Hi KAH! I'm Earthfire. I'm not really good at reviewing poetry, but I'll give this a try. I've read the book Crispin, by the way, so I think it's cool ...

Hi Gladius! I really liked this photos. I love pictures of water and nature. My only suggestion is taking the first photo from a different angle so we can see ...

Toothpaste.

This reminds me of this contest that's in my newspaper every year. It's so hilarious to read the winning ones...

This was beautiful. I especially loved how you used the word "you". It made me think that Martha was standing by Susie's grave as she talked to her.

Hi RainWanderer! I'm Earthfire and I'll be your reviewer today. This story made me laugh. I love over-dramatizing everyday stuff too. Great job! :smt001 I didn't see the word "hot" ...

Hi! I really liked this story. You were telling it in a "proper" voice which added to the effect. :smt001 Great job! The only thing I was wondering about was ...

Fantasy is the best!

Hi Allessandre! I'm Earthfire and I'll be your reviewer today. First of all, I just want to remind you about punctuation. You forgot to put apostrophes and periods in some ...

Hi! This was really cool. I don't think I would be able to do that sort of challenge. The only thing that I would suggest doing is making it more ...