Earthfire713

Hacker "Everyone, continue as you were," my voice boomed from the sky.

Welcome to YWS! First of all, great job on this. The imagery was beautiful and I could visualize it really well. My suggestions: Surrounded by the forest that was holding ...

Wow. That is a really unique way to write a prologue. Great job! That would be so creepy to listen to that on the phone. Anyways, I found a nitpick ...

Hey, Enigma! I really liked this story. The description was wonderful and I could picture what was going on vividly. My only comment is that it seems...too like the book, ...

Thanks Leja!

I was wondering: when is the proper time for the MC in a novel to set off on their quest or whatever? In the novel that I'm writing right now, ...

I'm doing something like that, only not as much. :smt001 I don't think I'm as talented as you. I'm just doing 85,000 words by August 31. That's a safe enough ...

Hey silentpages! Welcome to YWS! I've read both of your stories and I have to say that they are AMAZING! You also have good taste in movies :) Princess Bride ...

I just barely read this, and I have to say I like it better than "The Hero and the Crown". Less dull, with a more interesting plot.

I'm currently working on a novel, but once I revise it a little, could you review it? I haven't posted it yet though.

Hi silentpages! Wow. This was amazing. So sad, but amazing. You did such a great job at pulling at our heartstrings and retelling this story of the "Little Mermaid". Sorry, ...

Wow. These are really great pictures. I can't offer any suggestions since I don't know anything about photography :smt001 but I think that they're really good. My favorites are "Apple ...

Hi FreakyDeaky! I'm Earthfire, and I'll be your reviewer today. I really liked this story. It's original and the beginning caught my attention right away. :smt001 Great job! The only ...

My friend got me addicted to them a few years ago, but now I'm not as interested. I'm planning on seeing the movie, though.

Hi LauraElizabeth! I'm Earthfire and I'll be your reviewer. First of all: Bravo! :smt001 This was a really interesting story which drew me right in. I love how you kept ...