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Re: Arrival of monsoon
Once upon a time It was a starless and a moonless night I was sitting on a chair by the window, Looking upto the sky. The sky looked dark and ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Rather lie here and cry.
well, i liked thed the poem as it was very expressive. And, also I could see the sadness that has been expressed through the poem. But, you could have made ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: My lonely letter.
I liked this poem. You have expressed your feelings very nicely. I hope your friends will forgive you. Things such as this happen in life so don't get too serious ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: J.A.P
Inside out. Hack it out with a knife. All your pain and sufferings. And all will be left will be your stoned heart, An emotionless heart….. If that’s what you ...
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: Friends
I liked this poem very much. friends are friends after all and you have written about them beautifully. this poem s awesome!!!!! :D
Oct 26, 2011 -
Re: The Breaking of the Black Mare
This poem was very bulky. You could have tried dividing it into stanzas. Other than that I really liked the poem. It was very sad and tragic. Also, try giving ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: The Breaking of the Black Mare
This poem was very bulky. You could have tried dividing it into stanzas. Other than that I really liked the poem. It was very sad and tragic. Also, try giving ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: A Shoulder to Cry On
IT seems really to be a rather nice poem. I also liked the song version of the poem. Looks like you are really serious about this person. But no, I ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: A Shoulder to Cry On
IT seems really to be a rather nice poem. I also liked the song version of the poem. Looks like you are really serious about this person. But no, I ...
Oct 13, 2011 -
Re: Caution: Objects In Mirror Are Closer Than They Appear
This was rather a very non-poetry type of a poem. I caught up only after reading the second stanza. But, well, yes, it was amazingly thoughtful of you to write ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: No One
Well, it was a rather very sad and emotional piece of beautiful poem. This poem really touched my heart. You could have made it better but well, anyways, it was ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Drunk on Colors
Well, it was a very beautiful and meaningful poem. I liked it. you could have made it better by dividing it into stanzas and also like the title says "drunk ...
Oct 10, 2011
