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Hello! Willa’s rager- Interesting name! Some of the sentences are short and choppy. I think the drunk scene where she witnessed when first seeing her friend could have been more ...

Very powerful. :)

Hello! My only suggestion is to capitalize your i to I. :) But you bring a very realistic feeling foreword that I’m sure many can relate to! Good job! ~E. ...