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again i say perfect. ironic though that I never said perfect in the first place :smt003 ERANBEAR peace out type on!!!

Hi it was beautiful although maybe if you said as if she were being branded :smt003 :smt003 ERANBEAR peace out type on!!!!

Awake my darling, Hear your children crying. They fear pain in your soul, They see vein as you moan, Moan your secret life away. Won’t you kneel and pray? Before ...

ziggiefred please tell all of ur friends on YWS about this and love [edited]

The Earth didn't end in 2012; it just started over. None expected to make it back to 2012 but we did—for the 3rd time. Did I mention we've been genetically ...

[quote="Sionarama"]We silently trudged up the hill. it was dark and the full moon was hidden behind ominous clouds. Finally, we reached it. It was a great manor and its windows ...

sorry guys im new just got on yesterday and when i was editing i did something wrong and i had to start over

ok so now that ive read it through its great. sorry i just read the sexual part and stopped because i found it offensive but its really great that emily ...

whoa that's... :smt007 maybe a little to far but what can i say hypocrisy is not a mature thing for a critic

definately a work i progress

that was great!!!!!! one problem though, "which he did but didn't know how" (sorry if it's not exact words but u get the gist) you need to be more specific. ...

i change tori to matt. Main Street to Central Park. And added some deets hope you like it :smt040

Matt paced through the corridors of his mind. He couldn't find the right thing to say. That's when it hit him. He walked to the corner of Central Park, and ...

great plot not much of a conflict though nice job not over complicating the character :smt003 i think it needs something but i cant put my finger on it :?: ...

thanks guys i really appreciate the feedback :smt003 I know I know its a work in progress