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Re: Chionophobia #4 /P
i like it! especially the ending. it gives you a punch in the stomach. i liked the character development, especially. but, i couldn't really imagine Kyle or Joanne. or the ...
Dec 31, 2006 -
Re: The Dragon Hunters
Prologue Nine-year-old hunter Conan shuddered in the cold autumn night and pulled his leather jacket tighter, breathing steam. Tall pines towered over him, swaying slightly in the bitter wind.He hated
Dec 30, 2006 -
Re: An Unknown Shadow
I like it! it reminds me of one of my favorite quotes: "Our weaknesses are like dogs; if we run from them, they chase after us. if you walk towards ...
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: Elemental chapter 1
It's really cool, But it looks like you rushed to write this. You should build up the suspician that it isn't Like jason to fight. Elena doesn't seem to realize ...
Dec 29, 2006 -
Re: The Blade of Power
I like it. it's short, only a few lines, but it still makes you think. i like poems like that. It has a real meaning, behind the few words and ...
Dec 29, 2006
