ELven-Maiden

okay. ignore my post.

A few typos, missing words and letters, but I'm not that good at them either, so I can't talk. :P I thought this was really good! There were some awkward ...

Albaster blinked as his brother suddenly disappeared from the room. Cursing luridly, he started after Kaige, determined to track them down.

Ahem. You forgot Kaige's brother, Albaster. :D

Is it okay if I add another characer? If not, then just delete this post. Name: Dria Age: unkown, but under two centruies. Gender: Female Race: drow looks: basic drow ...

Wow. Kinda creepy. You did a great job. You really freaked me out. The tone is perfect, though really creepy. I was shuddering through the whole thing. (I wasn't using ...

Niyana sat on the low straw matteress and rubbed her head. "I hate this," she groaned. "I really do hate this." Myles shrugged off his cloak, revealing his usual black-and-gold ...

Wow. That really sucks for poor Iro. I really liked this! you have a great story going on here, and you've instantly caught me, the reader, in a trap I ...

Wow, that was really cool how you described everything! However, there were a few parts that sort of stopped the flow a little. I suggest you should shange things like ...

Awesome! It was a little fast for me to keep up, and I wanted a little more action between the man and Tamia. Slightly disappointing when they just stop. Add ...

(Note--I've changed the name Selethra to Eldra, simply because it's a better name than Selethra. But I'm still struggling. If you have any better ideas, please tell me about them! ...

Dang. I read it too fast. Now I have to wait until the next chapter, lol! A little awkward worrding here and there. It didn't seem like a story; it ...

Don't tell Robert this. He'll light the teabag on fire and then some :O Anyway. I thought this was really cool. The ending, I thought, was very good. [Quote: Snoink ...

the Aiekeir i told you was ten years old. This is the 24-year-old Aiekeir. there's a huge different. when something as sudden and drastistic happens, your personality usually changes just ...

Omg, Dragons are sooooo close!!! COME ON, DRAGON CHUMS!!!!!!!