ELven-Maiden

bio :D name: Syden race: werewolf gender: male age: unkown, but he acts like an old teen appearance: unusually big, and dark gray. history: unkown,likes to wander and not be ...

and here's one for Molton, too. name: Molton Race: human Gender: male age: unknown, but he's old. appearance: tall and lank, with long white hair with a deep widow's peak ...

if you want a bio for Caden, i'll give you a bio. Name: Caden Race: human Gender: male age: 17 appearance: rather tall, with long black hair and dark blue ...

lol i completly understand. i have a little bit of that problem plu everyone is on my back for grammar, so i know what you feel like. whenever you post, ...

Alright, roleplay, k? basically, you create some thief or assasin or something. You can be anything you want; this doesn't have to be fantasy, but if you want to be ...

tee-hee. he's so fat, he's fun to poke! *pokes Fred.*

Chapter 4 (To avoid confusion, I’ll explain to you now that I’ve just given Niyana webbed fingers.) They didn’t meet very many travelers on the road, and most of the ...

Wow. This is really cool. I like the characters here; especially in the prolougue, when Kay's an innocent little boy, and in the next chapter he's a hardened man. They ...

I get a basic idea of a setting. But I think you rush the descriptions too much. Do you think you could slow it own a bit? In fact, the ...

Albaster trotted to a stop in front of hte wide river, shaking the rain from his hair. He bent close to the river, regarding it with a practiced eye. The ...

Hey, Goldie! If you do choose to be a healer, I've printed an antire manual of healing herbs for a character I created a while back, and I still have ...

I like this. It captures the attention of your readers and sets the story immediatly. After that, I can ony echo what Pages said. Keep writing! I'm excited to see ...

Yay! I'm so excited!! :elephant: Throw a cloak on her and put her back to the sun, she'll be okay during day. She'll just be very cranky :P

Hey, could Dria fit in here? This seems so much fun! I won't be much trouble, I promise!! :Puppyface: However, If you really think another character will disrupt things, I'll ...

Okay, I've patched up the battlescene. Please tell me what you think!!! *Pleading glance* :P