ELven-Maiden

"What do you mean? what happened?" Syden looked nervously around. "Why do we have to decide what to do?"

Caden stood at the bank of the river, staring into the water thoughtfully. With Alex's wolves, Liskano's and Kasko's poison, and Gery's idea of collapsing tunnels, they actually had a ...

"he'll probably have mine too when he finds out what i've done." "What did you do?" Nicarga asked. "I already told you; i slowed the creeps down."

"Those priests give me the creeps," he said, almost bitterly. "I would've let the poor things go, but they had no wit left." He looked behind him, then started back ...

Syden seemed unusually smug. "I found a way to slow down a few pests," he said casually.

Syden was low in the bushes, so none of the humans saw him. He could see the priests and hunters milling around, talking quickly about the Alans and the pack ...

One thing, too many commas. quote: kept all of my aggression, and feelings inside Quote: hanging out with my friends, and even gymnastics. These two commas aren't needed. quote: After ...

Syden looked up, his ears perked. "I hate preists," he muttered, standing up. Quietly, he slippedinto hte forest to look.

Caden winced, but hid his discomfort by examining the knife. it was beautiful crafted, but Caden didn't intend to keep it. He might throw it in the river or something... ...

Cadne shook his head vigorously and pushed the knife away. "I don't want it!" He almost screamed. I don't want it, and i don't want killing to get any easier!"

Syden only sighed, but he kept his mouth shut. only Nicarga knew his secret, and he had no idea what had made him tell her, but anyone esle who knew ...

Caden clenched his teeth. "he was...He was..." he took a deep breath to steady himself. "He was going to kill me, and..." Caden felt as though he was going to ...

Syden gazed uncomfortably at the body. "You should've let him live," he said quietly. "Shot his leg or something. Then we could've learned where hte rest of his pack is. ...

Caden quietly lowered himself out the window, onto the roof below. He had no idea where he was going to go, or even if he would make it, but he ...

"Grey, it would be suicide to trap us all in here," Caden said tiredly. Grey scowled. "i said most the entrances, not all," she said indigntatly. "YOu think I'm that ...