ELven-Maiden

I liked it. Despite how long it was, though, it moved really slow. Acelin reached out and touched the cold, smooth surface of the golden egg. She watched in astonishment ...

Jhadi laughed. Arabian girls were very different than English girls. He supposed it was the harsh desert climate. "What can I do?" he asked Alla, glancing around the ship.

"I'm fine," Kenran answered with a smile, glancing up at the greying sky. "We're lucky he had the last shift. Otherwise there would be two of them right now to ...

Reiko winced slightly at Sano's words, but other than that he tried to keep his face tight. Geomana was making no sense to him. He had been nothing but enemies ...

80 political people rock!! GO PAT BUCHANAN!!!!!

*You're characters were fun, though. You just got into the story! :(*

Creeping stealthily through the forest, Kenran tried to get back to the camp without being caught. He hated the Sea's sentries; they could hide anywhere at anytime, and sometimes they'll ...

(alas, I have barely any time school computer blocks this site :( ) Reiko glanced over at them, leery eyed. "I'm not hungry," he insisted. He didn't want to stay ...

Nice work of Flash Fiction. I was rather impressed. however, I didn't really feel your character's fear or pain or whatever else you are trying to make me feel. Also, ...

Jhadi finished wrapping his leg and tested his weight on it. He should be able to walk just fine as long as he didn't move his foot too much. After ...

"Mid-day?" Hunter repeated. The word was unfamiliar to him. "Yes," Layro said. "As in the sun is in the middle of the sky." Hunter still didn't understand. "s-sun..." He had ...

what?! I thought I posted!!! hmph.... WELCOME TO YWS!!!!! *does a ridiculous little dance, grabs raven in a headlock, and gives the newb a major, major nugie* you are totally ...

The boy flinched slightly as the girl addressed him, and he glanced around one last time for a way out. seeing none, he sighed and shrugged. "I d-didn't want to ...

Reiko shrugged off his hand and started to curse him out, but he took a deep breath and pushed his pride behind him. It had gotten him into trouble too ...

whoa, whoa, whoa, hold on. Nina? Are you who I think you are? My Celary Roomie from camp? If you are who I think you are, I'm Jackie If not, ...