EAThomas

First off, this is not really my type of thing. It’s very, very short. There’s not really enough room to expand it into a real story. It’s more of a ...

(This is a part of a novel I started working on last year. I got over 57 pages and over 20,000 words before I realized that I couldn't get much ...

First paragraph: “I didn’t know who the man was or what he was doing there.” Change the “or” to “nor”. Remember: either or; neither nor. Okay, done now and wow... ...

I’m not sure exactly what you meant, but I don’t think you mean to say “my face felt in awe.” I thought that maybe you were looking for “fell”, but ...

(This was a one act play I wrote for my University's One Act Play Festivle. I won, so I was able to produce my play. It isn't exactly what I ...

Quick grammar check on the first line, hear instead of here, really easy mistake. The sudden direct address in the first paragraph too… this is something that drives me crazy ...

(The story of a girl who killed herself and then decided to blog about it. shortened for your convenience) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I killed myself. I did no

First thought: I thought the main character was female until specifically told otherwise. This isn’t necessarily a criticism, as the first time I picked up an Agatha Christie novel I ...

This isn’t so much a short story as a vignette. Nothing really happens, which is fine as an exercise. The quality is pretty good. I was a little confused by ...

Ahh… a story from the land where everybody’s a rapist! That is one of three complaints I have. The other is that you wrote his instead of he’s. The last ...

His name was Joel, and at the time I liked him very much. He was one of those guys, you know, the one you just know your mother wish you’d ...

First section done so far: Right now I can pretty clearly say that this is not my type of work. I’m reading this because you obviously put so much time ...

Oleander Oleander was the Prince of Fairies, heir to the throne of Queen Titania and her consort Oberon. Oleander had been a wild child in his youth, practically a disciple ...

Hello Everybody, I'm new (really? I couldn't have guessed! *fakesarcasmsarcasm*), and clearly nervous or I wouldn't be inserting such bad jokes this early in. I'm 20... I just turned 20 ...