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I’m a few paragraphs in and I haven’t really decided if I like this yet. Your word choice is well… interesting, which may or may not be in a bad ...

Layover Dmitri scrolled through his e-mail again. Sometimes his blackberry was the most useful thing in the world, and other times, like now, it felt like a useless little piece ...

A few very quick grammar bits and then I’ll start on content: "Yes, you were singing, Hush Here Comes A Whizz Bang." You should put quotes around “Hush Here Comes ...

I'm sorry for filling up your wall with a long description, ... To be honest, your story wasn't bad.... Don't hesitate to contact me if you ever need another review. ...

This is a really short post because the next one's really long. These aren't so much chapters as blog posts... hence the title of the work. Wow, it has been ...

I’m not really sure where to start. There were a few odd little errors I’ll cover first, and then on to my actual review. First off I’m not sure if ...

I disagree with the above review. It might could use more verbs, but it’s not a poem, it’s a vignette. The point of a vignette is something that does tell ...

Okay, so this is my long short story. It's pretty long, but it's really good. I'll try to post all of it for critique in the next few days. A ...

Let’s start out with this: I don’t like vampires. They are a big turn off for me. I’m not just talking about Twilight vampires I’m talking about Dracula level vampires. ...

I can't think of anything else, but feel free to direct any queries or further concerns to me by replying directly to this review. Man I'm totally still learning my ...

(This is one of those things that you write as a charatcer, but you know no one's ever actually going to buy it because it's so insane. So this a ...

Wow… holy crap do I want to know what’s going to happen next. Okay, so let’s run over a few quick things: For an actually book chapter this is terrible ...

To start out, it’s 3:20 in the morning, and I’m fairly tired fight now. That being said I was able to read your story, and it kept my attention for ...

(The story of a girl who killed herself and then decided to blog about it) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Okay, I will try not to let my thoughts wander off

Okay… really creepy! I’m not sure if this is what you meant… but the nameless narrator just seems like a stalker. If you don’t want him to seem like a ...