Dynamo

Kaeru's mouth began to open. That's when Skylar caught a whiff of Shigure's scent coming off of him. "Now, Tala!" she shouted. Tala raced forward, aiming to attack the metal ...

For the most part they ate lunch in silence. When everyone was finished eating they all headed back outside as a group to start their afternoon sparring session. Akira was ...

"Skylar?" Sky looked up to see Kai and Shigure standing behind her. She got to her feet and said, "Yeah?" "I think Shigure has something she wants to say," Kai ...

Kai was the second one to finish. He ended up moving the rock about fifteen yards. He had to step it up if he was going to get it to ...

Kai and Ryukin stood in front of the boulder. "So Ryukin, think we can move it?" "Ivy wouldn't have given us this training if the didn't think we could do ...

(You can post now.)

It's not finished yet. Give your drawing more definition with stronger lines and put some more thought into shading. The drawing looks smudged. Am I right in thinking you use ...

It looks very good. For the most part you used colour ranges that were close to each other. The only issue I have with it is the red strip on ...

That's very good. Clean lines, good use of shading to show texture, and all the proportions look right. But as good as it looks, from a professional standpoint it's only ...

That's pretty good for your first try. You have a good understanding of how to place your focal points. The only issue I see is with the old lamp. The ...

"What should I do today?" Kai asked. "Do you feel confident with your control over your strength?" Ivy asked. "Yes, I do." "Do you remember that boulder I had those ...

(What I'm trying to do is with the time they all spend together they start warming up to her, and Shigure starts liking being a part of The Aushalten. So ...

(I know the feeling.) "Looks like you like Shigure even less than Elise when she first showed up," Sean said. "No, I was just intimidated by her charming personality," Skylar ...

Shigure stared back at Skylar for a moment, before turning to Kai and asking, "Do you always let you subordinates speak this freely?" "They're not my subordinates," Kai said, "they're ...

By the time Skylar got back everyone had gathered in the main hall to meet Shigure, the newest member of The Aushalten. They were asking a lot of questions, but ...