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Re: A Certain City of Espers
Ren "It's the least I could do for getting you involved in all of this," he told her. He waited for her to unlock the door before helping her inside. ...
Jul 14, 2011 -
Re: A Certain City of Espers
Jordan Accelerator tilted his head a little, an irritated sneer starting to pull on the corner of his mouth. "I'm already the strongest in this city, why should I work ...
Jul 13, 2011 -
Re: Genre questions
Depends if it fits with the rest of your story. For example, you could have a book that featured both fantasy and sci-fi if A) time travel was involved, or ...
Jul 12, 2011 -
Re: How to achieve a 48 hour day?
Glad I could help. :D
Jul 11, 2011 -
Re: How to achieve a 48 hour day?
Good point, Nate. I hadn't even thought about temperature. Although, other factors that would affect the temperature are also the planet's distance from the sun, and the thickness of its ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: How to achieve a 48 hour day?
I see. Well, instead of making the planet larger, why don't you just make its roatation slower? That'll solve the problem with the gravity, and you'll still be able to ...
Jul 10, 2011 -
Re: How to achieve a 48 hour day?
I remember hearing about a study where they put a guy in a room with no clocks, no windows outside, basically no way for him to figure out what time ...
Jul 9, 2011 -
Re: A Certain City of Espers
Ren Cait winced a little as she began to stand up. Ren started moving forward to help her, but she waved him away. "I can do this," she told him ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Event Recurrence
No problem. I actually have a similar plot element in the story I'm currently writing. The main character is half human, and half Uxlian, which is basically a race of ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: A Certain City of Espers
Ren Ren and Motoharu were still in Cait's room even after Taki and Lena left. After everything that's happened, he felt even more nervous about leaving Cait on her own. ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: A Certain City of Espers
(So, I guess now we need to get all our characters to bed and have them get ready for the next day. In the morning they have to go to ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Event Recurrence
I agree with Kyllorac. There is no mathematical equation for plot points in stories, it's up to the judgement of the writer how and where to put them. Again, like ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Dialogue for characters
Of course. If it fits with the setting of your story, your characters can speak however you want them to. I know in the Dragon Riders or Pern series all ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Famous
If you post something on YWS, someone will read it. This site is meant to help young writers improve their literary skills and supply them with meaningful feedback. Don't be ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: What are ways someone would summon a dark spirit?
What about agreeing to give up a first-born son to a demonic entity in order to enlist its aid? I know they did something like that in the movie Paranormal ...
Jul 5, 2011
