Dynamo

(I can't post anything for my character because he isn't there.)

I was wondering when something Jediy would show up. Now that something interesting has happened I feel compelled to read more.

8/10 Makes sense.

(Near the end there was a long speech that Squall gave right before they attacked the enemy. I wanted to write the whole thing but the game wouldn't stop and ...

(If somebody could help me introduce my character by finding him washed up on a river bank that'd be just swell.)

If you guys had enough money to reserve an entire convention building for this, I'd beg my parents to let me go. Of course, I'd probably be in college at ...

That's pretty good. I couldn't find anything wrong with the spelling or grammer. I'll try to read the others when I get the chance.

(Hey Grif. In your first post when your character was talking to Nate, you could have made things easier and said that all the characters in one place would create ...

Ryouku noticed Karana's sullen expression and decided to try and cheer her up. He sat beside her and asked, "How are you holding up?" "Not that good." She replied. Ryouku ...

You know, I was thinking the exact same thing a while ago. I think it'd be a good idea, but if it's anywhere outside of Ontario I doubt I'd be ...

I have a question. Can we have other characters from our story show up in this one? You know, like NPCs?

Looks like fun. [s]Name: Vince Storybook: Demon Slayers (I'm a technophobe when it comes to links.) Age: 167 (looks 24) Gender: Male Race Vampire/Human Personality: Strong silent, secretive type Appea

7/10 The French wouldn't be in an army anyway, that's run away at the first sign of battle.

Sandy's earpiece began to ring. She turned it on and said, "Eric?" "How's Jax doing?" "Just fine, no thanks to you," she hissed. He sighed heavily. "We've arrived at my ...

"I've got a better idea," Ryouku said. "How about both of you sit down and I'll go get the others to help mend your wounds?" They both said at the ...