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Re: Rydia's Reviews
...and chapter 5:
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Outpost 101 - Chapter 5
Chapter 5 “My god, doesn’t that thing ever run out of bullets?” Axel asked. The jeep was still firing at the rock they were using for cover. “You know, in ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Be You
(Your turn, Ayumi.)
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Re: VG Rumble
(If Luke and Raven are going to get together we need to do something with them.) "So this is all the black sun's doing?" Raven asked. Luke nodded. "There's no ...
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
Since you said you liked the last three chapters, here's chapter 4:
Mar 11, 2008 -
Re: Outpost 101 - Chapter 4
Chapter 4 Axel and Hank hid behind a nearby rock to use as cover while they reloaded their weapons. The spray of bullets from the silver guy’s gun never let ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: VG Rumble
Ilum gained Level 2 Fire! Karana gained Level 3 Ice! Raven gained Level 3 Water! Luke gained Level 2 Void! Izuki gained Level 3 Unlock! Current Abilities: Ilum: Level 3 ...
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Re: VG Rumble
Luke placed his hand on Raven's shoulder. Just by looking at her expression he knew what she was thinking. "It will only give them life if you want it to." ...
Mar 10, 2008 -
Re: Rydia's Reviews
I wouldn't mind getting some critiques for my new fanfiction, Outpost 101. Here's the first three chapters: I don't really care if you critique for spelling or grammar, I just ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Be You
Kai smiled. "If we leave now we can still catch that movie," he said. "How are we getting there?" Audra asked. "We can take my car." "Okay." Kai got to ...
Mar 9, 2008 -
Re: Outpost 101 - Chapter 3
Chapter 3 About fifteen minutes had passed and Caboose still hadn’t returned. Everyone was beginning to worry about him. “Do you think we were a little too hard on the ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: VG Rumble
(Just so you know, these aren't the normal get-bitten-and-turn-into-a-zombie zombies. Before the black sun came, they were just corpses rotting in the ground. The power of the eclipse brought them ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Pretenders
Asher stared at Amber for a few moments, taking in what he had heard. He simply nodded, as if he understood everything she just said. "You must be tired," he ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: You Can't Do That in Canada!
It is illegal to leave your horse in front of the Country Squire hotel in Fort Qu'Appelle, Saskatchewan, without hitching it securely to the hitching post. However, the hitching post ...
Mar 7, 2008 -
Re: Be You
Sounds good, too.
Mar 7, 2008
