Dynamo

Well, the only thing I can suggest is your short paragraphs. Although they are descriptive, I feel there is a lot of space between them. It might just be me, ...

Luke has gained Level 3 Intimidate! Current Abilities: Ilum: Level 3 Ice Level 3 Fire Level 1 Gravity (Advanced) Level 3 Burst of Strength (Skill) Karana: Level 3 Fire Level ...

Kai was the first to wake up the next morning. The first thing he noticed as his body began to rise for the new day was the weight of something ...

"But, enough about that," Dynamo said as he looked at Kai, "I'm sure you're eager to absorb the Power Shrine's energy and get out of this place. Once you take ...

Luke squared off again with Caim, waiting for him to make the first move. He did his best not to give in to the pain, one of the most basic ...

The dragon grinned and did something with his shoulders that could only be described as a shrug. "I had no idea when, or even if, anyone was coming. I'm just ...

"Let's take this outside," Luke said as he led Caim out the front door, his sword still pressed to his neck. When they were out he released the leader and ...

Kestrel blinked at him, unsure of what to think. "So... this challenge wasn't a test of my logic?" she asked. "Actually, I wanted to test both your logic and your ...

(Sounds good. Our characters are pretty much out until the next morning anyway.)

Caim laughed at Warren's demand. "Do you honestly think I'm going to open the docks back up for you?" Luke's face hardened at what he said. "I don't think demands ...

Current List of Incantations: Oraza : Fire/Strength NEW!!! Raiakk : Thunder/Speed NEW!!! Kkumnar : Ice/Endurance NEW!!! Mozago : Force Zuu : Magic Kkumnuss : Shield Tere : Touch/Hand Raiassou : ...

Kestrel was still looking for the pearl when a familiar energy pattern caused her to stop and turn. Ichidan had come down to the basement and was sitting beside Urahara, ...

Kai squared off with the Draconic as he pulled himself out of the pile of rubble. Karana was soon at his side with a sword of pure fire in her ...

(That's okay. Sounds like you're going to be pretty busy. Don't worry, I know your character well so I can control her in your absence.) Kai smiled as he brushed ...

(Alright, Stella. Although with my idea it's going to take a little while for your character to discover her powers. I want to give each of our characters their own ...