Dynamo

The manga you meantioned is where I actually got the idea of the story. The part about bringing stray dogs home actually slipped my mind and I didn't remember until ...

(Again, I need honest critiques, especially near the end. I need suggestions on how to lengthen the last few paragraphs of the chapter. Also, sorry if some of you see ...

"Ilum!" Karana went to his side, propping his head on her lap. "Ilum, wake up!" Ilum groaned and opened a weary eye. He looked up at her. "Hey, Karana... Did ...

11/10 It's just that good, I had to rate it twice!

Ilum gained Level 1 Burst of Speed! Karana gained Level 1 Water! Raven gained Level 3 Metaphysical Shield! Waren gained Level 1 Water! Luke gained Level 3 Healing! Izuki gained ...

Izlude's hand suddenly sparked as he thrust it into Luke's chest. It exploded in a shower of red sparks, throwing Luke into the air. He landed hard on the ground, ...

Kestrel fired time and time again, making the crack a little larger each time. After two hours the crack was an inch long. She held out hard hand again, determined ...

Raven felt Izlude's gauntlet hit her in the side of the head, dazing her for a few moments. "Silence, wench!" When Raven could see straight she could see the rage ...

STORYBOOKS!!!

Wow, these are all pretty good. Looks like you did a lot of site seeing while you were in Greese.

Urahara nodded. He reached into his pocket and pulled out the pearl they had used in the previous two tests. Kestrel gave him an odd look. "Excuse me for asking, ...

Ilum knocked the sword out of his brother's hand before grabbing him. "Why are you doing this, brother!? Don't you know what the dark knight plans to do? He wishes ...

Izlude thrust one of his arms forward and out came a bolt of red energy that struck both Luke and Raven in the chest, sending them flying. Warren ran up ...

(Cool, I want to play that game so much! Is he playing the Wii version or the Gamecube one?) Luke brought his sword up to block Izlude's before he could ...

(I can't think of anything to post at the moment. Can someone else start off the fight?) --Boss Battle!-- Izlude Battle Length: 12 posts